The Elevator Pitch in 4 Easy Pieces

by Lily Iatridis on October 6, 2010

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In Monday's teleseminar hosted by Powerful You, I shared four pieces of information every elevator pitch must include so that your audience will know exactly who you serve and how you do so.  

Since that call was mostly for private group members, I'd like share that information with all my readers here today.  Toward the end of this article, I'll also share some tips on what to do if you have to cut your elevator pitch short.  Let's face it, at informal cocktail parties, you can't stand in a circle with four or five people and dive into an entire elevator pitch without sounding canned or long-winded.  It must sound natural.  

A couple of problems around the shortened elevator pitch I've encountered lately at networking events:

People at networking events who simply state their name and the name of their company, like "Morgan Stanley" or "Goldman," etc. Everybody else in the group nods knowingly and looks impressed, but I daresay they have no better idea what that person actually does than I.  Yes, the big company name offers some brand recognition, but that's not specific enough.  

Folks who immediately dive into long descriptions of their company's history, or a listing of services that their employer provides customers.  Perhaps this is to compensate for not being able to provide a well-known company name?  By the end of these introductions, I also have no idea what that person does to serve their clients, and I'm more than ready to move on and meet someone new.

So here are four pieces of information that a strong elevator pitch should include:

1. The WHO.  You must identify your audience.  In other words, who is your target market?  What are their common characteristics? Can you name your niche in 1 to 3 words?  If you're working on your elevator pitch and not sure exactly who your target market is yet, my ebook on the subject includes a section to help you define your market.

2. The WHAT.  What is the primary benefit of your product or service?  Warning:  do not describe the features of your service.  

For example, "public speaking coaching" is a feature of my service, while "becoming a confident public speaker" is a benefit of my service. "Guiding clients through speech construction" is a feature as well, while "consistently delivering clear messages" to your audience is a benefit.

Here’s a secret:  to identify the primary benefit to include in your pitch, focus on the primary point of PAIN of your target market. Offer a solution to that.  Don’t assume that you know the primary point of pain.  Research this!

Give your primary benefit the “pillow talk test.”  Is this benefit something so simple, and powerful a need that your prospect would tell their spouse about it in bed after the kids have gone to sleep?

3. The WHY.  Why is the benefit is so important to the client?   How will this change the clients’ life for the better?  What's the purpose?  Again, this is based this on research.  Your listeners want to be alleviated from their point of PAIN, but in order to be able to do or be what?  Add this to your introduction after you state your primary benefit.

4. The HOW.  How do you differ from your competition?  What’s your USP (unique selling propostion)?  If you have that sorted out, then you're in good shape.  Add it at the end of your introduction.

Sometimes this can be a lot of information to distill into a simple statement.  If you're struggling with this, you may want to try my 30 minutes to a 30 second elevator pitch coaching program.  I've just recently added a new component to the program to make the our 30 minutes more focused and productive, while keeping the price at $50:  a preliminary homework assignment!!  If you purchase the program, I send you a homework assignment with exercises to start narrowing down your message before our call, and you send your assignment to me for review.  During coaching, we hammer out the final statement together, and then you sleep on it for a week to make sure it feels right to you.  After that, you're set or we do a little editing.

By the way, here's my elevator pitch, based on the formula above:

"Hi.  I'm Lily Iatridis.  I help business professionals become confident public speakers, so that they can be The Expert in their area.  I draw on 17 years of experience in martial arts and apply those principles to help clients overcome their fears.  I also rely on 10 years experience as a classroom teacher to help clients deliver clear messages and develop a strong relationship with their audiences consistently"

A few tips if you're short or long on time:

If you only have 5 seconds, just state the WHO and the WHAT.  

Example:  "Hi. I'm Lily Iatridis.  I help business professionals become confident public speakers."

If you only have 10 seconds, state the WHO, WHAT, and WHY.

Example:  "Hi.  I'm Lily Iatridis.  I help business professionals become confident public speakers, so that they can be The Expert in their area."

And if you have more than 30 seconds to give your elevator pitch, use the opportunity to be creative.   Share a story highlighting a benefit of your product or service, offer a quick tip, or build in some credibility factors, like some information on amount of people who have benefitted from your service already.

 

Lily proofs 9 4 150x150 The Elevator Pitch in 4 Easy PiecesLily Iatridis of Fearless Delivery, has a proven track record and knows the key elements in effective and engaging presentation.  Her expertise is in supporting professionals to get their message expressed clearly to deliver the biggest results in their live and online presentations.  Secrets and strategies such as "how-to" shortcuts, personalized instruction and even packaging the presentation are just some of the skill sets that Lily brings to her audience to create a fearless and effective delivery. 

If you've ever been nervous in front of an audience, please download Lily's free ebook, "5 Steps to Neutralize Difficult Audience Members– Without A Power Struggle!"  In this ebook, Lily shares simple strategies that will put your mind at ease, arm you with useful strategies, and entertain you with some stories of her own bumps along the path to public speaking success.

 

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  • http://www.CharlotteSiems.com Charlotte Siems

    Great post, Lily!  I'm leaving on a trip tomorrow and this info was just what I need as I introduce myself to people.  Very helpful!

  • http://richlifeadvisors.com Beau

    Thank you for breaking down the elevator pitch into bite size componets.  It sounds easy to talk about "what you do" for 30 seconds, but most people have no idea what to say to communicate a clear message that let's others know how to help. 
    The Who, What , Why, and How gives a clear and simple method to network the right way…

  • http://timefinder4you.com Lauren McMullen

    Great advice! I love the part about stating your main benefit based on your target markets pain.

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Thanks for all your comments!

    Lily

  • http://www.MissingSecretToParenting.com denny hagel

    Lily, This is a topic that I have had in the back of my mind since I began my business over a year ago. I am comfortable speaking in public, however, I have always felt that I "rattle on" and lose people in the process. With your amazing tips I can zero in on exactly what I want and need to say to create the interest and impact I am looking for! Thanks for sharing. Blessings~denny

  • Victoria Gazeley

    This is one of the most clear, concise instructional pieces on developing an ‘elevator pitch’ I’ve seen. An perfect timing, too, as I’m working through this process with my own businesses. Thank you!

  • http://rachellecarlson.com Rachelle Carlson

    I like the easy to understand format! Thanks again.
    Rachelle

  • http://www.casamariadesigns.com Maria Hidalgo-Ferretti

    I have struggled with the 'elevator pitch' always. I understand now that if we are not clear on the who, what, why it becomes very difficult to introuduce ourselves, I personally stumble on my words, thus loose my audience. Your article has brougth clarity to what my pitch should be. Thank you!

  • http://www.drscottconsulting.com Dr. Scott

    Lily, I love this post.  I built a dental practice on networking and word of mouth!  You NAILED it… thanks for the valuable information.  I'm going to tweet this right now!

  • http://RoseMis.com Rose Mis

    Lily this is BRILLIANT. Your 4 main points are vital to effectively communicating a simple, powerful message. This article would be a big help to all of my readers as well :-) – small and home business professionals and network marketers. Would love to talk to you about that !!

  • http://firecrackercommunications.com Nancy

    I used to teach a workshop called The 20-Second Connection that was completely focused on what many people call the "elevator speech." It was amazing to me how many entrepreneurs struggled with this. In many ways, coming up with something you can say in just a few seconds is so much more challengeing than giving a long speech! You gotta grab 'em, make a connection and feel as if you communicated your "What" effecitively… fast!
    Breaking it down into components is a great way to get people started. I bet you have a lot of fun in your coaching program, helping people explore the possibilities and get comfortable actually saying  their pitch. Good for you!

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Rose, thank you so much! If you would like to send the article along to your readers, I’d be honored. Please feel free to do so anytime. If you’d like to talk more, please email me: Lily@FearlessDelivery.com.

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Thanks Nancy, it is fun! I just like getting to know people. :)

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Thanks Dr. Scott!

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Great! Thanks very much, and glad to be of help!

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Wow Denny- thank you, and I can’t wait to hear more about your secrets to successful parenting!!

  • http://www.WebMarketingConnections.com/blog Carol Douthitt

    Wow… I recently attended a 3 day marketing event where half of one day was devoted to creating your own unique elevator pitch.  Your 4 simple steps in this post was soooo much easier!  Thanks for the very useful information!

  • http://www.FearlessDelivery.com Lily Iatridis

    Glad to hear it!

  • http://www.VivaVisibilityBlog.com NancyMarmolejo

    Love that post, Lily! And it’s really interesting because my daughter is enrolled in karate right now and I keep thinking how useful the mental strength and focus are for business.nnall the best,nNancy

  • Lily

    Thanks Nancy, and it’s very true! Some of the mental challenges around martial arts study is very much like the ups and downs of learning how to run a business successfully. nnBest,nnLily

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  • http://LifeStoryBook.org Susan McKenzie

    You have me intrigued, Lily… this is an exercise I need to work on! I already feel more confident – at least to get started!

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